*clickies link and starts reading*
Hey there! <3
Thanks! I'd appreciate the feedback!
What I have to say:
The plot was interesting, and I can't wait to read more. However, I found the first-person extremely distracting. But.. DRAKE AND MEI FOREVER! :D Aurek should be with Catzi!
/random comment on her OC shipping couples
P.S. I suck at critiques, sorry.
I wrote first-person! I meant present-tense! *whacks head* I don't mind first person at all, just not present-tense
I love A Siren's Call! In fact, one of my OCs is in it. Guess who? :) Alexis Underworld the mentally insane goddess herself! I have yet to see an update on that fanfic, hope for one soon!
P.S I like postscripts.
I used to switch tense all the time, so I just stick to past tense.
You do? I feel loved. *prays for Brett to update*